Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Process paragraph: Explanation

In class, we talked about Process paragraphs. We made a peanut butter and jelly sandwich and we described order of the pictures about traveling. The Peanut butter and jelly paragraph would be considered a "how to" process paragraph. The other process paragraph is an "explanation". This tells the reader how a particular event occurred or how something works.

Below I have given you a list of transitions I would like you to include in your process paragraph. You do not have to use them all.

(initially, until, afterward, before, when, as soon as, during, meanwhile, finally)

I would like for you to write an explanation paragraph for this assignment. Whatever topic or theme, however, it has to tell how an event occurred or how something works.

16 comments:

  1. Every single thing has to be done or created by a process, from little things to the big and massive creation by men. Even this world was created by a process. Who created this world? It was created by a big explosion like many people say? In this post it well be discovered the true creator of this world and the process that took making it. In the beginning of time the planet we live on it wasn’t as we see it today. We see trees, oceans, big mountains and so on. The Earth in that time was disorganized, dark and void. Imagine a world without any form. Who was responsible for this? “In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth.” Genesis 1:1. We can see that there is a powerful being that took place in the creation of this world. How long God took creating this world? “And on the 7th day God ended his work wish he has made; and he rested on the 7th day from all his work which he has made.” Genesis 2:2. God took 6 days creating this world and on the 7th day rested from his work. Every day a new creation was made.
    Day 1- The creation of light and the separation from the darkness and the light, Genesis 1: 3, 4.
    Day 2- The creations of the heavens and the separation of the heavens and the waters.
    Day 3- The waters and the earth were separated. The grass started to grow and the trees as well with their different seeds and kinds.
    Day 4- The creation of the great lights, the sun and the moon. The purpose of these great lights was to be signs for the season, days and years.
    Day 5- The creation of all the animals with their different species. There is something very curious. God created everything with his voice but a new creation was made, different from all the others, created with his own hands, his own image after his own likeness. God created the humans race. There purpose of the humans was to rule the world.
    We can see that there was a process on the creation this world.

    Miguel A. Martinez

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  2. The commandments of God are comparable with the laws of nature: both are the creator source. Mercy and this freedom is what allows a man to grow spiritually and be perfect, even coming to resemble God. The moral foundations of law are imposed by the Creator into the spiritual nature of man. When we feel the presence of this law on us every time our conscience tells us what should and what should not do. Promised the Hebreo people observe the 10 commandments, was finalized after a pact between God and the Hebrews. This covenant was that the Lord promised to the Jewish people His mercy and protection. Finally, God wrote His Ten Commandments, which were previously transmitted orally, on two slabs of stone and ordered to be stored in the "Ark of the Covenant."

    1. Have no other gods before me.
    2. Thou shalt not have.
    3. Do not take the name of the Lord thy God in vain.
    4. Remember the Sabbath day to keep it holy, six days labor and do all your work, but the seventh day Sabbath is dedicated to the Lord your God.
    5. Honour thy father and thy mother: that thy days may be long and be good on earth.
    6. Do not kill.
    7. Do not commit adultery.
    8. Do not steal.
    9. Do not bear false witness against your neighbor.
    10. Do not covet.

    Finally to the commandments prove useful, it must make them our own, that is concern that not only guide us but should be incorporated into our conception of the world that live in our subconscious.

    Suleika Ruiz

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  3. Steps to make a homemade custard
    The homemade flan is one of the most delicious sweets that people cook for activities and is as easy and fast to make. First, you must have the ingredients on hand as milk, sugar, 6 eggs, vanilla, caramelized sugar. Then the ingredients are already there to put the sugar in a pie pan and cause it to rotate until it becomes a caramel. Separately, boil the milk and add sugar and vanilla. When, beat the eggs must add a little milk and stir. Place in water bath milk mixture with egg. When in the oven but in the water bath pan and put on gold is that is it. Finally, buried a knife to see if a bit compact. Then, out of the water bath and enjoy the flan with all guests.

    Jannat Heredia

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  4. sthephanny redondoMay 2, 2011 at 8:11 PM

    limom dessert.

    first of all nesecitamos, lemons, condensed milk, cream, cookies. we left we took lemons and extract them, then open the cans of condensed milk and cream, the get into the blender and blend with lemon Judging from until at hand, as soon as it thickened, then placing a layer of cookies ensima a mold and they put a layer of the mixture, and so are barias're finishing layers when you increase the amount of mix, just like about three layers before you finish. eventually he end up with a thick layer of mixture. then put it in the refrigerator for several hours. and then finally you can enjoy a delicious dessert of mud.

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  5. prepare milk for my son. ( in my case i use instant milk).

    steps
    prepare de ingrdients ( milk, water)
    prepare the utensils (spoon, baby bottle)
    claen the area
    wash the hands
    put 8 ounces of water in the baby bottle
    put 4 spoon ok milk in the water
    sahke the bottle
    gave to the baby

    Paragraph

    when the people have a baby , neen to gave milk. prepare the milk is very easy. firs neen much love.... when you are goin to prepare the milk initially need to prepare the ingredients like milk and water and the utensil.before to prepare yo need to clean the area when you finish to clen the area you wash your hands. when everithin is clean put 8 ounces of water in the baby bottle as soon as put 4 spoon of milk in the botthel and shake whith love. finally put the baby in your arm and gave the milk.


    Wilmarie Rodriguez

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  6. How to make pancakes:

    1.Find all Ingredients.
    2.Clean your hands and the work area.
    3.Open the box of Pancakes (Add water).
    4.Take two cup of pancake flower and put in a bowl.
    5.Mix one cup of water in the same bowl.
    6.Blend with a hand mixer for 2 minutes.
    7.Then, coat large nonstick skillet with cooking spray and warm over medium heat.
    8. Pour ¼ cup of the batter into hot skillet.
    9.Cook for 3 minutes.
    10.With the spatula flip over.
    11.Cook for 2 minutes.
    12.Turn off the stuff.
    13.Serve pancakes with bananas and sirope.

    To make pancakes, first you can find all ingredients. Then you clean your hands and the work area. Next open the box of pancakes (Ready Mix only Add water). Take two cup of pancake flower and put in a bowl. Mix one cup of water in the same bowl. Next, blend with a hand mixer for 2 minutes. Then, coat large nonstick skillet with cooking spray and warm over medium heat. Pour ¼ cup of the batter into hot skillet and cook for 3 minutes. With the spatula, flip over the pancakes. Cook for 2 minutes. Remember TURN OFF the stuff. Serve the pancakes with bananas and sirope. This is simple and yummy.

    Joannie Nieves Gonzalez

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  7. How to make a cheescake and anyone can do it.Recipe for a cheesecake as dessert should never miss a home cooked meal, today we bring you a delicious cheesecake recipe that believe it or not is a very simple to do and I am sure you will love once you do and want cheesecake and so do many pamper your family with a rich dessert, ready to go with the cheesecake recipe ... valley with the ingredients

    Ingredients

    to the base of the cheesecake, maria biscuits 2 cups (they are like vanilla cookies) crushed, 1 / 2 cup melted butter. Let's go now with the ingredients for the filling: 2 cups cream cheese, 1 cup sugar, 10 egg yolks, 3 tablespoons cornstarch, 1 cup cream, 3 teaspoons vanilla extract, 2 tablespoons lemon juice, 10 clear, 3 cups hot water, now step by step of the preparation that will take 1.20 minutes to do.

    Prepare cheesecake base:
    1.-Mix crackers and butter to form a soft and pliable dough.
    2.-Line the bottom and sides of a round or rectangular mold and refrigerate for 30 minutes.

    Filling Preparation
    1.-Beat cheese, sugar and yolks to make a smooth mixture.
    2.-Add the cornstarch, cream, vanilla and lemon juice and continue beating until mixture is smooth again.
    3.-Beat the egg whites until stiff (snow) and incorporate the previous batter surrounding form.
    4.-Pour the mixture into the mold covered with the base leaving 1 inch of edge separation.
    5.-In a larger cast than the cheesecake, pour hot water and placed on the mold with the mixture to form a bath.
    6.-Bake for 1 hour at 170 º c until top is golden.

    Jonathan Olan Torres

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  8. to make a grilled cheese you should take the following steps:
    1.take out all of the materials
    2.open the bread's twisty tie
    3.take out 2 slices of bread
    4.close the bread
    5.open the lid of the butter and scoop the necessary amount that would go to use
    6.spread the butter on one side of the slice of bread evenly
    7.put it on a plate and move on to the next slice
    8.spread another amount of butter and do the exact same thing spread the butter evenly
    9.put both slices on the flat pan
    10. flip both silces over if you don't want them to burn
    11.time to put the cheese on the slice: whichever slice you want
    12.put both slices on top of each other
    13. flatten the grilled cheese once it's finished
    14. turn off the stove
    15. put the grilled cheese on a plate
    16.clean up the mess and put everything back
    17. time to eat!!!!

    paragraph:
    to make grilled cheese is very easy to make if you follow the steps given. first, you take out all of the materials. then, you take out the bread and open it's twistty tie. next, you open the butter and scoop a good amount of butter. with the utensil that you are using put the amount of butter that you scooped on the slice of bread.you then spread that amount evenly on the slice. after that, do the same exact step for the othe slice, if you want it very buttery you can spread the butter on both sides of the slices. put it on the flat pan until it turns yellow.flip the slices over if you don't want them to burn.later, put on the cheese, whichever side you want. put one of the silces on top of the other. flatten the grilled cheese with the spatula.turn off the stove an put it on a plate. after, clean up. finally, its time to eat. in conclusion, you can have fun while making a grilled cheese. enjoy!!!!!!



    Stephanie M. Acevedo Méndez

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  9. Why most of people don’t have time for a relationship with Christ?

    There are 3 basics fundamental foundations to have a good relationship with God and we know them very well: first is praying, then reading the bible and finally applying what we read: (experiencing it). Those are the three basic foundations to have a good relationship with Christ. Yes it may sound very easy to practice this form but most people that have tried it, have found it very difficult but why such thing that sounds so simple it’s so hard to do? We know that as human been we have our everyday motive, all of us have a reason why we wake up every day, some of us don’t even have enough time to sleep because we have so many things to do in our everyday life that our stress is steamily high, which we already know a lots of people will be suffering from heart problems in the future.
    Lots of people don’t have the time and space for God because of work, school and a lot’s of more things they have to do during the day but why should we have a relationship with God? First we will receive forgiveness from our sins for eternal life, second God will give us the Holy Spirit that will refresh us and give us new strength for our everyday work plus all the blessing that we will receive in this world and in the new earth. Finally we will experience God’s transformation by building our character. At the same time we will feel his presence in our everyday life by showing us love, giving us peace and protecting us from everything that will hurt us.



    Melvin A. Rivera

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  10. How works my job.

    I love my job. I work as a natural health food products distributor. Initially, I have good human relations with the health food managers. Afterward it is necessary to sale good products. Those products must be helpful to the person who needs to improve their health. The products do not secondary effects as regular medicine. Thus, the users will recommend the products to new customers. Then the health food managers will buy more products from me as soon as they sold most of the products. Meanwhile, it is important to marketing the products in the local health newspaper. Before you visit a health food store, the product must be marketing on newspaper, radios or TV. During the past months the products marketed at TV were the most sold. However, because of the TV marketing cost the health food news paper and radio were the most communication systems used in this business. Finally, the cost of the products is very important. In conclusion I love my job because I make many friends and help many persons to improve their health and prevent diseases. It is blessed job.
    Jane Angarita García
    May 3rd 2011

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  11. Law project

    First the legislator thinks about a necessity that arises. Second he consults his law assistants. Afterward a draft is written. After revising it. During the process a series of steps are taken. As soon as it is brought to the floor a vote is given. It approve it will go to the governor’s office. Finally the governor signs it and it becomes a law.

    Zulma Rosas Justiniano

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  12. How to make a tuna sandwich!!

    You need two slices of bread, tuna, some mayonnaise, a dish and a spoon.
    First you open the bag of the bread.
    Then you choose two slices of bread.
    We scooped some mayonnaise and some tuna.
    Then we mixed up the mayonnaise and the tuna.
    Grab a slice of bread and put some of the mix.
    Grab the other slice of bread and join them.
    Get something to drink.
    And finally enjoy your meal.



    There are two ways in which you could make your tuna and mayonnaise sandwich. The first is the classic 'mix' method, where the tuna and mayonnaise are pre-mixed in a bowl before being spread on the bread. In the second method the mayonnaise is spread on the bread first, followed by a layer of tuna on top. It is up to the individual as to which method is used. Mix tuna and mayonnaise as appropriate. Place a slice of bread down on a cutting board. Slather your mayonnaise and tuna mixture on to the bread (or layer the ingredients, if not pre-mixed). Fold over bread (if using only one slice) or place another slice of bread on top if using more than one slice. Cut sandwich and finally VUUUAALAAA there is your perfect sandwich.


    Wilson Pagan Vazquez

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  13. One of the most delicious dishes you can eat and my favorite is the lasagna. So I want to express and describe how to make a rich and tasty lasagna. First preheat the oven to 375 degrees F (190 degrees C). Have a large pot of lightly salted water to boiling. Then add the lasagna noodles and cook for 8 to 10 minutes or until al dente, drain. In a skillet, brown ground beef. Using a fork, mix the ricotta, eggs, garlic powder, parsley, salt and pepper. In another bowl, combine the tomato paste and tomato sauce. In a 9x13 baking pan inch layer noodles, ground beef, tomato sauce mixture and cottage cheese mixture. Two layers of each form. Cover with foil and bake for 30 minutes.

    After having followed all the steps one by one can enjoy a meal rich in all nutrients. The taste of the rich combination of flavors. You can not resist eating more and more.

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  14. One of the most delicious dishes you can eat and my favorite is the lasagna. So I want to express and describe how to make a rich and tasty lasagna. First preheat the oven to 375 degrees F (190 degrees C). Have a large pot of lightly salted water to boiling. Then add the lasagna noodles and cook for 8 to 10 minutes or until al dente, drain. In a skillet, brown ground beef. Using a fork, mix the ricotta, eggs, garlic powder, parsley, salt and pepper. In another bowl, combine the tomato paste and tomato sauce. In a 9x13 baking pan inch layer noodles, ground beef, tomato sauce mixture and cottage cheese mixture. Two layers of each form. Cover with foil and bake for 30 minutes.

    After having followed all the steps one by one can enjoy a meal rich in all nutrients. The taste of the rich combination of flavors. You can not resist eating more and more.

    Amarilys Ruperto

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  15. French toast is one of those “Happy Foods” that bring a smile to everyone’s face. It’s that perfect weekend breakfast food that just makes you feel like you’re celebrating. For this Mother Day Im going to make some french toaste to my mom.
    First we separate the basic ingredients, eggs, milk, sugar, butter, and bread.
    The first step would be to beat eggs, sugar, salt, milk and vanilla in a shallow dish. Once the mixture has been prepared, soak the bread in it. Now, heat butter over medium high heat in a pan. Bake each slice of bread in the pan until it turns slightly brown on each side. The last step would be to sprinkle with powdered sugar, if desired and your French toast is ready to be served.

    Karla M. Rodriguez Morales

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  16. How to make a ham & egg sandwhich cooked

    First you get a pan. Place it on the stove to heat up. Then take a slice of ham and cook it on the pan. As soon as the ham is cooked put on a plate. Get 1 egg and cook it on the pan to and make it a scrambled egg. Put the scrambled egg with cooked ham together in the same plate. Aftwards get a toaster to toast 2 slices of sandwhich bread. Once the bread is toast you can make your cooked ham & egg sandwhich.

    Juan Ramirez ortiz

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